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some readers. The excerpt below is the complete first chapter of
Secret Prey, and it has not been censored in any way. If you are
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continue. Thank you. The chairman of the board pulled the door shut behind him,
stacked the rifle against the log-sided cabin, and walked down to the end of
the porch. The light from the kitchen window punched out into the early-morning
darkness and the utter silence of the woods. Two weeks of nightly frost had
killed the insects and had driven the amphibians into hibernation: for a few
seconds, he was alone. Then the chairman yawned and unzipped his bib overalls,
unbuttoned his pants, shuffled his feet, the porch boards creaking under his
insulated hunting boots. Nothing like a good leak to start the day, he thought.
As he leaned over the low porch rail, he heard the door opening behind him. He
paid no attention. Three men and a woman filed out of the house, pretending not
to notice him. "Need some snow," the woman said, peering into the dark. Susan
O'Dell was a slender forty, with a tanned, dry face, steady brown eyes, and
smile lines around her mouth. A headlamp was strapped around her blaze-orange
stocking cap, but she hadn't yet switched it on. She wore a blaze-orange
Browning parka, snowmobile pants, and carried a Remington .308 mountain rifle
with a Leupold Vari-X scope. Not visible was the rifle's custom trigger job.
The trigger would break at exactly two and a half pounds. "Cold sonofabitch, though," said Wilson McDonald, as he
slipped one heavy arm through his gun sling. McDonald was a large man, and much
too heavy: in his hunting suit he looked like a blaze-orange Pillsbury
Doughboy. He carried an aging .30-06 with open sights, bought in the thirties
at Abercrombie & Fitch in New York. At forty-two, he believed in a certain kind
of tradition his summer car, a racing-green XK-E, was handed down from
his father; his rifle came from his grandfather; and his spot in the country
club from his great grandfather. He would defend the Jaguar against far better
cars; the .30-06 against more modern rifles, and the club against parvenus,
hirelings, and of course, blacks and Jews. "You all ready?" asked the chairman of the board, as he came
back toward them, buttoning his pants. He was a fleshy, red-faced man, the
oldest of the group, with a thick shock of white hair and caterpillar-sized
eyebrows. As he got closer to the others, he could smell the odor of pancakes
and coffee still steaming off them. "I don't want anybody stumbling around in
the goddamn woods just when it's getting good." They all nodded: they'd all been here before. "Getting late," said O'Dell. She wore the parka hood down, and
the parka itself was still unzipped; but she'd wrapped a red and white kaffiyeh
around her neck and chin. Purchased on a whim in the Old City of Jerusalem, and
meant to protect an Arab from the desert sun, it was now protecting a
third-generation Irishwoman from the Minnesota cold. "We better get out there
and get settled." Five forty-five in the morning, opening day of deer season.
O'Dell led the way off the porch, the chairman of the board at her shoulder,
the other three men trailing behind. Terrance Robles was the youngest of them, still in his
mid-thirties. He was a blocky man with thick, black-rimmed glasses and a thin,
curly beard. His watery blue eyes showed a nervous flash, and he laughed too
often, a shallow, uncertain chuckle. He carried a stainless Sako .270, mounted
with a satin-finished Nikon scope. Robles had little regard to tradition:
everything he hunted with was new technology. James T. Bone might have been Susan O'Dell's brother: forty,
as she was, Bone was slim, tanned, and dark-eyed., his face showing a hint of
humor in a surface that was hard as a nut. He brought up the rear with a.243
Mauser Model 66 cradled in his bent left arm. Four of the five the chairman of the board, Robles,
O'Dell, and Bone were serious hunters. The chairman's father had been a country banker. They'd had a
nice rambling stone-and-redwood home on Blueberry Lake south of Itasca, and his
father had been big in Rotary and the Legion. The deer hunt was an annual
ritual: the chairman of the board had hung twenty-plus bucks in his forty-six
years: real men didn't kill does. Robles had come to hunting as an adult, joining an elk hunt as
a thirtieth-birthday goof, only to be overwhelmed by its emotional power. For
the past five years he'd hunted a half-dozen times annually, from Alaska to New
Zealand. O'Dell was a rancher's daughter. Her father owned twenty miles
of South Dakota just east of the Wyoming line, and she'd joined the annual
antelope hunt when she was eight. During her college years at Smith, when the
other girls had gone to Ivy League football games with their beaux, she'd flown
home for the shooting. Bone was from Mississippi. He'd learned to hunt as a child,
because he wanted to eat. Once, when he was nine, he'd made soup for himself
and his mother out of three carefully shot blackbirds. Only McDonald disdained the hunt. He'd shot deer in the past
he was a Minnesota male, and males of a certain class were expected to
do that but he considered the hunt a pain in the ass. If he killed a
deer, he'd have to gut it. Then he'd smell bad and get blood on his clothing.
Then he'd have to do something with the meat. A wasted day. At the club, they
were playing some serious gin drinking some serious gin, he thought
and here he was, about to climb a goddamned tree. "Goddamnit," he said aloud. "What?" The chairman grunted, turned to look at him. "Nothing. Stray thought," McDonald said. One benefit: If you killed a deer, people at the club
attributed to you a certain common touch not commonness, which would be
a problem, but contact with the earth, which some of them perceived as a
virtue. That was worth something; not enough to actually be out here, but
something. The scent of woodsmoke hung around the cabin, but gave way to
the pungent odor of burr oaks as they pushed out into the trees. Fifty yards
from the cabin, as they moved out of range of the house lights, O'Dell switched
on her headlamp, and the chairman turned on a hand flash. Dawn was forty-five
minutes away, but the moonless sky was clear, and they could see a long thread
of stars above the trail: the Dipper pointing down to the North Star. "Great night," Bone said, his face turned to the sky. A small lake lay just downslope from the cabin like a smoked
mirror. They followed a shoreline trail for a hundred and fifty yards, moved
single file up a ridge, and continued on, still parallel to the lake. "Don't step in the shit," the woman said, her voice snapping
back in the silence. She caught a fresh pile of deer droppings with her
headlamp, like a handful of purple chicken hearts. "We did that last week with the Cove Links deal," the chairman
said dryly. The ridge separated the lake and a tamarack swamp. Fifty yards
further on, Robles said, "I guess this is me," and turned off to the left toward
the swamp. As he broke away from the group, he switched on his flash, said,
"Good luck, guys," and disappeared down a narrow trail toward his tree
stand. The chairman of the board was next. Another path broke to the
left, toward the swamp, and he took it, saying, "See you." "Get the buck," said O'Dell, and McDonald, O'Dell, and Bone
continued on. The chairman followed the narrow flashlight beam forty-five
yards down a gentle slope to the edge of the swamp. The lake was still open,
but the swamp was freezing out, the shallow pockets of water showing windowpane
ice. One stumpy burr oak stood at the boundary of the swamp; the
kind of oak an elf might live in. The chairman dug into his coat pocket, took
out his rifle sling, leaned the rifle against the tree, and began climbing the
foot spikes that he'd driven into the tree eight years earlier. He'd taken three bucks from this stand. The county road
foreman, who'd been cleaning ditches in preparation for the snow months, told
him that a twelve-pointer had moved into the neighborhood during the summer.
The foreman had seen him cutting down this way, across the middle of the swamp
toward this very tree. Not more than two weeks ago. The chairman clambered into the stand fifteen feet up the
tree, and settled into the bench with his back to the oak. The stand looked
like a suburban deck, built of preservative-treated two-by-sixes, with a
two-by-four railing that served as a gun rest. The chairman slipped off his
pack, hung it from a spike to his right, and pulled the rifle up with the
parachute cord. The cartridges were still warm from his pocket as he loaded
the rifle. That wouldn't last long. Temperatures were in the teens, with an icy
wind cutting at exposed skin. Later in the day, it would warm up, maybe into
the upper thirties, but sitting up here, early, exposed, it would get real damn
cold. Freeze the ass of that fuckin' O'Dell. O'Dell always made out that she
was impervious to cold; but this day would get to her. The chairman, wrapped in nylon and Thinsulate, was still a
little too warm from the hike in, and he half-dozed as he sat in the tree,
waiting for first light. He woke once more to the sound of a deer walking
through the dried oak leaves, apparently following a game trail down to the
swamp. The animal settled on the hillside behind him. Now that was interesting. Forty or fifty yards away, no more. Still up the ridge, but it
should be visible after sunrise, if it moved again. If it didn't, he'd kick it
out on the way back to the cabin. He sat waiting, listening to the wind. Most of the oaks still
carried their leaves, dead brown, but hanging on. When he closed his eyes,
their movement sounded like a crackling of a small, intimate wood fire. The chairman sighed: so much to do. The killer was dressed in blaze orange and was moving quietly
and quickly along the track. Dawn was not far away and the window of
opportunity could be measured in minutes: Here: now twenty-four steps down the track. One, two,
three, four, five, six, seven, eight... twenty-three, twenty-four. A tree here
to the left... Wish I could use a light. The oak tree was there, its bark rough against the fingertips.
And just to the right, a little hollow in the ground behind a fallen
aspen. Just get down here... quietly, quietly! Did he hear me?
These leaves... didn't think about the leaves yesterday, now it sounds like I'm
walking on cornflakes... Where's that log, must be right here, must be...
ah! From the nest in the ground, the fallen aspen was at exactly
the right height for a rifle rest. A quick glance through the scope: nothing
but a dark disc. What time? My God, my watch has stopped. No.
Six-seventeen. Okay. There's time. Settle down. And listen! If anyone comes,
may have to shoot... Now what time? Six-eighteen. Only two minutes gone? Can't
remember... two minutes, I think. There'd be only one run at this. There were other people
nearby, and they were armed. If someone else came stumbling along the track and
saw the orange coat crouched in the hole... If they came while it was dark, maybe I could run, hide.
But maybe, if they thought I was a deer, they'd shoot at me. What then? No. If
someone comes, I take the shot then, whoever it is. Two shots are okay. I can
take two. It wouldn't look like an accident anymore, but at least there
wouldn't be a witness. What's that? Who's there? Somebody? The killer sat in the hole and strained to hear: but the only
sounds were the dry leaves that still hung from the trees, shaking in the wind;
the scraping of branches; and the cool wind itself. Check the
watch. Getting close, now. Nobody moving, I'm okay. Cold down
here, though. Colder than I thought. Have to be ready... The old man... have to
think about the old man. If he's there, at the cabin, I'll have to take him.
And if his wife's there, have to take her... That's okay: they're old... Still
nothing in the scope. Where's the sun? Daniel S. Kresge was the chairman of the board, president, and
chief executive officer of the Polaris Bank System. He'd gathered the titles to
him like an archaic old Soviet dictator. And he ran his regime like a dictator:
two hundred and fifty banks spread across six midwestern states, all wrapped in
his cost-cutting fist. If everything went right, he would hold his job for another
fifteen months, when Polaris would be folded into Midland Holding, owner of
six hundred banks in the south central states. There would be some
casualties. The combined bank's central administration would be in Fort
Worth. Not many Polaris executives would make the move. In fact, the whole
central administrative section would eventually disappear, along with much of
top management. Bone would probably land on his feet: his investments division
was one of the main profit centers at Polaris, and he'd attracted some
attention. O'Dell ran the retail end of Polaris. Midland would need somebody
who knew the territory, at least for a while, so she could wind up as the
number two or three person in Midland's retail division. She wouldn't like
that. Would she take it? Kresge was not sure. Robles would hang on for a while: a pure technician, he ran
data services for Polaris, and Midland would need him to help integrate the
separate Polaris and Midland data systems. McDonald was dead meat. Mortgage divisions didn't make much
anymore, and Midland already had a mortgage division which they were
trying to dump, as it happened. Kresge turned the thought of the casualties in his head: when
they actually started working on the details of the merger, he'd have to
sweeten things for the Polaris execs who'd be putting the parts together, and
the people Midland would need: Robles, for sure. Probably O'Dell and Bone. McDonald? Fuck him. Kresge would lose his job along with the rest. Unlike the
others, he'd walk with something in the range of an after-tax forty million
dollars. And he'd be free. In two weeks, Kresge would sit in a courtroom and solemnly
swear that his marriage was irretrievably broken. His wife had agreed not to
seek alimony. In return for that concession, she'd demanded and he'd
agreed to give her better than seventy-five percent of their joint
assets. Eight million dollars. Letting go of the eight million had been one of
the hardest things he'd ever done. But it was worth it: there'd be no strings
on him. When she'd signed the deal, neither his wife nor her wolverine
attorney had understood what the then-brewing merger might mean. No idea that
there'd be a golden parachute for the chairman. And his ex wouldn't get a
nickel of the new money. He smiled as he thought about it. She'd hired the
wolverine specifically to fuck him on the settlement, and thought she had.
Wait'll the word got into the newspapers about his settlement. And it
would get in the newspapers. Fuck her. Forty million. He knew what he'd do with it. He'd leave the Twin Cities behind, first thing. He was tired
of the cold. Move out to L.A. Buy some suits. Maybe one of those BMW
two-seaters, the 850. He'd been a good, gray Minnesota banker all of his life.
Now he'd take his money to L.A. and live a little. He closed his eyes and
thought about what you could do with forty million dollars in the city of
angels. Hell, the women alone... Kresge opened his eyes again with a sudden awareness of the
increasing cold: shivered and carefully shook the stiffness out. Looking to the
east, back toward the cabin, he could see an unmistakable streak of lighter
sky. There was a ruffling of leaves to his right, a steady trampling sound.
Another deer went by, a shadow in the semi-dark as the animal picked its way
through a border of finger-thick alders at the fringe of the swamp. No antlers
that he could see. He watched until the deer disappeared into the
tamarack. He picked up the rifle then, resisted the temptation to work
the bolt, to check that the rifle was loaded. He knew it was, and working the
bolt would be noisy. He flicked the safety off, then back on. The last few minutes crawled by. Ten minutes before the season
opened, the forest was still gray to the eye; in the next few minutes, it
seemed to grow miraculously brighter. Then he heard a single, distant shot:
nobody here on the farm. Another shot followed a minute later, then two or three shots
over the next couple of minutes: hunters jumping the gun. He glanced at his
watch. Two minutes. Nothing moving out over the swamp. Through the scope, the target looked like an oversized
pumpkin, fifteen or twenty feet up he tree. His body from the hips down was out
of sight, as was his right arm. The killer could see a large part of his back,
but not the face. The crosshairs of the low-power scope caressed the target's
spine, and the killer's finger lay lightly on the trigger. Gotta be him. Damn this light, can't see. Turn your head.
Come on, turn your head. Look at me. Have to do something, sun's getting up,
have to do something. Look at me. There we go! Keep turning, keep
turning... Thirty seconds before the season opened, the crackle of
gunfire became general. Nothing too close, though, Kresge thought. Either the
other guys were holding off, or nothing was moving beneath them. What about the deer that had settled off to his left? He turned on the bench, moving slowly, carefully, and looked
that way. In the last few seconds of his life, Daniel S. Kresge first saw the
blaze-orange jacket, then the face. He recognized the killer and thought,
What the hell? Then the face moved down and he realized that the dark circle
below the hood was the objective end of the scope and the scope was pointed his
way, so the barrel... ah, Jesus. Jesus went through Kresge's mind at the same instant
the bullet punched through his heart. The chairman of the board spun off the bench feeling no
pain, feeling nothing at all his rifle falling to the ground. He knelt
for a moment at the railing, like a man taking communion; then his back buckled
and he fell under the railing, after the rifle. He saw the ground coming, in a foggy way, hit it face first,
with a thump, and his neck broke. He bounced onto his back, his eyes still
open: the brightening sky was gone. He never felt the hand that probed for his
carotid artery, looking for a pulse. He would lie there for a while, head downhill, would Daniel S.
Kresge, a hole in his chest, with a mouth full of dirt and oak leaves. Nobody
would run to see what the gunshot was about. There would be no calls to 911. No
snoops. Just another day on the hunt. A real bad day for the chairman of the board. |
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