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![]() The Prey Series Sudden Prey Virgil Flowers The Kidd Series Other Novels Etcetera | Sudden Prey The Prey series contains strong language and scenes
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some readers. The excerpt below is the complete first chapter of
Sudden Prey, and it has not been censored in any way. If you are
offended by this sort of material, or will get in trouble for reading it (e.g.
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continue. Thank you. Through the speakers above his head, little children sang in
sweet voices, O holy night, the stars are brightly shining, it is the night
of the dear Savior's birth... The man who might kill Candy LaChaise stood in the cold and
watched her through the glass doors. Sometimes he could see only the top of her
head, and sometimes not even that, but he never lost track of her. Candy, unaware, browsed through the lingerie, moving slowly
from rack to rack. She wasn't really interested in underwear: her attention was
fixed on the back of the store, the appliance department. She stopped, pulled
out a black bustier, held it up, cocked her head like women do. Put it back,
turned toward the doors. The man who might kill her stepped back, out of sight. A minivan pulled to the curb and a chunky woman in an orange
parka hopped out and pushed back the van's slide door. An avalanche of
dumplinglike children spilled onto the sidewalk. They were of both sexes, all
blond, and of annual sizes: maybe four, five, six, seven, eight and nine years
old. The van headed for a parking space, while the woman herded the kids toward
the doors. The man took a bottle from his pocket, stuck his tongue into
the neck, tipped it back, and faked a swallow or two. The woman hustled the
kids past him, shielding them with her body, into the store and out of sight.
That was what he wanted; he put the bottle away, and looked back through the
doors. There she was, still in lingerie. He looked around, and cursed
the season: the Christmas decorations, the dirty piles of hard, frozen snow
along the streets, the wind that cut through his woollen gloves. His face was
thin, unshaven, the skin stretched like parchment on a tambourine. Nicotine had
stained his teeth as yellow as old ivory. He lit a Camel, and when he put the
cigarette to his lips, his hands trembled with the cold. When he exhaled, the
wind snatched away the smoke and the steam of his breath, and made him feel
even colder than he was. An oily baritone, a man who'd never be Bing Crosby: ...
Let nothing you dismaaay, Remember Christ our Sa-ay-vior was born on Christmas
Day... He thought, "Christ, if I could only stop the music..." From where he stood, he could see under the golden spire atop
the state capitol; under the December overcast it looked like a bad piece of
brass. Fucking Minnesota. He put the bottle to his lips, and this time let a
little of the wine trickle down his throat. The harsh grape-juice taste cut
into his tongue, but there was no warmth in the alcohol. What in the hell was she doing? She'd cruised Sears Brand Central, taking her time, looking at
refrigerators, buying nothing. Then she strolled through the ladies' wear
department, where she'd looked at blouses. Then she walked through Brand
Central, checking the cellular telephones. Again she walked away: he'd been inside at the time, and she'd
almost trapped him in the television display. He hit the doors, went through,
outside into the wind... but she'd swerved toward the lingerie. Had she spotted
him? A TV salesman had. Picking up his ragged coat and rotten shoes, the
salesman had posted himself near the Toshiba wide-screens, and was watching him
like a hawk. Maybe she... There. She was on her way out. When Candy walked out of Sears, he didn't look at her. He saw
her, but he didn't move his head. He simply stood against the outside wall,
rocked on his heels, mumbled into his parka and took another nip of the MD
20-20. Candy never really saw him, not then. She half-turned in his
direction as she left the store, but her eyes skipped over him, like they might
skip over a trash barrel or a fire hydrant. She bopped down the
parking lot, not dawdling, either. Her step was light, athletic, confident, the
step of a cheerful woman. She was pretty, in a thirty-something high-school
cheerleader way, with natural blond hair, a round Wisconsin face and a clear
Wisconsin complexion. She walked halfway down the lot before she spotted the Chevy
van and started toward it. The man who might kill her, who still stood by the doors,
said, "She just walked past her car." A Republican state legislator in a wool Brooks Brothers
overcoat heard the words and hurried into the store. No time for dialogue with
a street schizo: you see them everywhere, mumbling into their wine-stained
parkas. "I think she's going for that van, dude." Candy liked country music and shirt pockets that had arrows at
the corners. She liked line-dancing and drinking Grain Belt. She liked
roadhouses on country blacktop, pickup trucks and cowboy boots and small
blue-eyed children and guns. When she got to the Chevy van, she took out a
two-inch key ring filled with keys and began running them through the lock. She
hit it on the twelfth one, and popped the door. The van belonged to a slightly ragged Sears washing machine
salesman named Larry. The last time she'd seen Larry, he was standing next to a
seven-hundred-dollar Kenmore washer with Quiet Pak and Automatic Temperature
Control, repinning his name tag. He was about ten minutes late late
enough that she'd started to worry, as she browsed the blouses and underwear.
Had the van broken down? That would be a major problem... But then, there he was, breathing hard, face pink from the
cold, leaning against the Kenmore. Larry was a wise guy, she knew, and she
didn't care for wise guys. She knew he was a wise guy because a bumper sticker
on the back of his van said, in large letters, AGAINST ABORTION? And
below that, in smaller letters, Then Don't Have One. Abortion was not
a topic for bumper-sticker humor. The man who might kill her mumbled into his parka: "She's in
the van, she's moving." The voice that spoke back to him was not God: "I got
her." Great thing about parkas: nobody could see the commo gear, the
microphones and earplugs. "She's gonna do it," Del said. He put the bottle of
Mogen David on the ground, carefully, so it wouldn't spill. He wouldn't need it
again, but somebody might. "Franklin says LaChaise and Cale just went into that pizza
joint behind the parking ramp," said the voice in his ear. "They went out the
back of the ramp, through a hole in the hedge." "Scoping it out, one last time. That's where they'll dump the
van," Del said. "Get Davenport on the road." "Franklin called him. He's on the way. He's got Sloan and
Sherrill with him." "All right," Del said, noncommittally. Not all right,
he thought. Sherrill had been shot a little more than four months earlier. The
slug had nicked an artery and she'd almost bled out before they got her to the
hospital. Del had pinched the artery so hard that Sherrill had later joked that
she felt fine, except for the massive bruise where Del had pinched her
leg. Putting Sherrill's face into this, so soon, might be too
heavy, Del thought. Sometimes Davenport showed all the common sense of a... Del
couldn't think of anything. A trout, maybe. "There she goes," said the voice in his ear. The salesman's van stank of cigar smoke. Candy's nose wrinkled
at the smell, but she wouldn't have to tolerate it for long. She eased the van
out of the parking space, and checked the gas: half a tank, more than enough.
She drove slowly up the block, to Dale, down Dale and onto I-94 toward
Minneapolis. Georgie and Duane would be waiting at Ham's Pizza. She looked at the speedometer: fifty-four. Perfect. Crooks
mostly drove too fast. Dick said they didn't give a shit about all the traffic
laws or the other small stuff, and half the time they'd hit a bank, get away
clean, then get caught because they were doing sixty-five in a fifty-five. She
wouldn't make that mistake. She tried to relax, checked all the mirrors. Nothing unusual.
She took the P7 out of her coat pocket, slipped the magazine, pushed on the top
shell with her thumb. She could tell by the pressure that she had a full
clip. Dick always made fun of the little bitty nine-millimeter
shells, but she'd stick with them. The small gun felt right in her hand and the
muzzle blast was easy to manage. The P7 held thirteen rounds. She could put
nine or ten of the thirteen shots into the top of a Campbell's soup can at
twenty-five feet, in less than seven seconds. A couple of times, she'd put all
thirteen in. Good shooting. Of course, soup-can lids didn't move. But on
the two occasions when she'd been shooting for real, she felt no more pressure
than when she'd been outside Dick's double-wide, banging away at soup-can lids.
You didn't really line anything up, you kept both eyes open and looked across
the front sights, tracking, and just at that little corner of time when the
sight crossed a shirt pocket or a button or another good aim point, you'd just
take up the last sixteenth of an inch and... Pop. Pop, pop. Candy got a little hot just thinking about it. Danny Kupicek had long black hair that his wife cut at home,
and it fell over his eyes and his oversized glasses so that he looked like a
confused shoe clerk. That helped when he was working the dopers: dopers were
afraid of anyone too hip. They trusted shoe clerks and insurance salesmen and
guys wearing McDonald's hats. Danny looked like all of those. He pulled the
city Dodge to the curb and Del climbed in and Kupicek took off, three hundred
yards behind the Chevy van. Del put his hands over the heat vent. "I gotta come up with a new persona for the wintertime," Del
said. "Somebody who's got a warm coat." "State legislator," Kupicek said. He'd been sitting in the car
off the capitol grounds, keeping an eye on Candy's car. He'd watched the
politicians coming and going, and noticed how prosperous they seemed. "Nah," Del said, shaking his head. "I wanna try somebody
legit." "Whatever, you gotta keep your head covered," said Kupicek.
He wore heavy corduroy pants, a sweater over a button-down shirt, a wool watch
cap and an open parka. "Fifty percent of all heat loss comes from the
head." "What do you think the hood is for?" Del asked, pointing over
his shoulder. "Too loose," Kupicek said, like he knew what he was talking
about. He was nine cars behind Candy when they entered I-94, in the slow lane
and two lanes to the right. "You need a stocking cap under there." "Fuck a bunch of stocking caps. I need a desk job is what I
need. Maybe I'll apply for a grant." Kupicek looked at him, the yellow teeth and the two-day
stubble. "You ain't grant material," he said, frankly. "I'm grant material.
Sherrill's grant material. Even Franklin is grant material. You, you ain't
grant material." "Fuck you and your wife and all your little children," Del
said. He picked up Kupicek's handset. "Lucas, you there?" Davenport came back instantly: "We're setting up in the Swann
parking lot. Where is she?" "Just passing Lexington," Del said. "Stay with her. When she gets off at 280, let me know as soon
as she's at the top of the ramp." "Do that," Del said. Kupicek was watching the van: "She's got some discipline. I
don't think we touched fifty-six since we got on the road." "She's a pro," Del said. "If it was me, I'd be so freaked, I'd be doing ninety. Course,
maybe they're not gonna do it." "They're gonna do it," Del said. He could feel it: they were
gonna do it. Georgie LaChaise was a dark woman with blue eyes that looked
out from under too-long, too-thick eyebrows. She had a fleshy French nose, full
lips with the corners downturned. She locked Duane Cale's eyes across the table
and said, "Duane, you motherfucker, if you drive off, I'll find you and I'll
shoot you in the fuckin' back. I promise you." Duane leaned forward over the yellow Formica table, both hands
wrapped around an oversized cup of Coke Classic. He had an unformed face, and
hair that had never picked a color: one eyewitness might say he was blond,
another would swear that he had brown hair. One would say apple-cheeked,
another would say fox-faced. He seemed to change, even as you looked at him. He
wore a camouflage army jacket over jeans and boots, with the collar turned up,
and a Saints baseball hat. "Oh, I'll do it," he said, "but it don't feel right. It just
don't feel right. I mean, we did that one in Rice Lake, I was good there." "You were perfect in Rice Lake," Georgie said. She thought,
You were so scared I thought we'd have to carry you out. "This time,
all you gotta do is drive." "Okay, you see right there?" asked Duane, tapping the
table-top with the cup. "You said it your own self: I was perfect. This don't
feel perfect, today. No sir. I mean, I'll do it if you say so, but I..." Georgie cut him off. "I say so," she said bluntly. She glanced
at her watch. "Candy'll be here in a minute. You get your asshole puckered up
and get behind the wheel and everything'll go smooth. You know what to do. You
only gotta drive two blocks. You'll be perfect." "Well, okay..." His Adam's apple bobbed. Duane Cale was too
scared to spit and the Coca-Cola didn't seem to make a difference. Lucas Davenport peeled off his topcoat and the gray Icelandic
sweater. Sloan handed him the vest and Lucas shrugged into it, slapping the
Velcro tabs into place, everything nice and snug, except if you took a shot in
the armpit it'd go right through your heart and both lungs on the way out the
opposite 'pit... Never turn sideways. "Fuckin' cold," Sloan said. He was a narrow, sideways-looking
man who today wore a rabbit-fur hat. "We live in fuckin' Russia. The Soviet
fuckin' Union." "Is no Soviet Union," Lucas said. They were in a drugstore
parking lot, Lucas and Sloan and Sherrill, and had gotten out of the slightly
warm car to put on the vests. A loitering civilian watched them as his dog,
wearing a blue jacket, sniffed up an icebound curb. "I know," Sloan said. "It moved here." Lucas pulled the sweater back over his head, then slipped back
into his topcoat. He was a tall man, dark-haired, dark-complected with ice-blue
eyes. A scar trailed through one brow ridge and expired on his cheek, a white
line like a scratch across his face. As his head popped through the sweater's
neck hole, he was grinning at Sloan, an old friend: "Who was trying to start a
departmental ski team?" "Hey you gotta do something in the middle of the..." The radio broke in: "Lucas?" Lucas picked up the handset: "Yeah." "On the 280 ramp," Del said. "Got it... you get that, Franklin?" Franklin came back, his voice chilled. "I got it. I can see
LaChaise and Cale, they're still sitting there. They look like they're
arguing." "Keep moving," Lucas said. "I'm moving. I'm so fuckin' cold I'm afraid to stop." "On University..." Del said. "We better go," Sherrill said. Her face was pink with the
cold, and nicely framed by her kinky black hair. She wore a black leather
jacket with tight jeans and gym shoes, and furry white mittens that she'd
bought in a sale from a cop catalog. The mittens were something a high school
kid might wear, but had a trigger-finger slit, like hunting gloves. "She'll be
picking them up." "Yeah." Lucas nodded, and they climbed into the city car,
Sloan in the driver's seat, Sherrill next to him, Lucas sprawled in the
back. "Here she comes," said Franklin, calling on the radio. "Check your piece," Lucas said over the seat to Sherrill. He
wasn't quite sure of her, what she'd do. He wanted to see. He slipped his own
.45 out of his coat pocket, punched out the magazine, racked the shell out of
the chamber, then went through the ritual of reloading. In the front seat,
Sherrill was spinning the wheel on her .357. As Sloan took the car through an easy U-turn and the three
blocks toward the Midland Steel Federal Credit Union, Lucas looked out the
window at the street, and felt the world begin to shift. The shift always happened before a fight, a suddenly
needle-sharp appreciation of image and texture, of the smell of other bodies,
of cigarette tar and Juicy Fruit, gun oil, wet leather. If your mind could
always work like this, he thought, if it could always operate on this level of
realization, you would be a genius. Or mad. Or both. Lucas remembered a stray thought from earlier in the day,
picked up the handset and called dispatch. "We need two squads on University," he said. "We're tracking a
stolen Chevy van and we want a uniform stop as soon as possible." He recited the tag number and license and the dispatcher
confirmed it. "We've got a car on Riverside," the dispatcher said. "We'll start
them that way." Candy pulled the van to the curb outside Ham's Pizza. Georgie
and Duane were waiting, and she slid over to the passenger seat, and popped the
back door for Georgie as Duane got in the driver's seat. "Everything okay?" Duane asked. "Great, Duane," Candy said. She gave him her cheerleader
smile. Duane hungered for her, in his Duane-like way. They'd gone to
school together, elementary through high school. They'd played on a jungle gym,
smart Candy and not-so-smart Duane. She'd let him see her tits a couple of
times once down by Meyer's Creek, skinny-dipping with Dick, when Dick
hadn't seen Duane coming, but Candy had. She was Dick's woman, all right, but
wasn't above building extracurricular loyalty for a time when it might be
needed. "Drive," Georgie said from the back. And to Candy: "You
set?" "I'm set." "This should be a good one," Georgie said. "Should be great," Candy said. Ten o'clock on a payday
morning. The paychecks were issued at eleven. The first employees would be
sneaking out to cash their checks by eleven-oh-one. That'd be an hour too
late. "There's the nigger again," Duane said, distractedly. A giant black man had come into Ham's before Candy had gotten
there, ordered a slice, asked if he could pay with food stamps. When told that
he couldn't, he'd reluctantly taken two crumpled dollar bills out of his pocket
and pushed them across the counter. "Food stamps," Georgia said in disgust. "He's one of those
screwballs. Look at him talk to himself." Franklin, shambling along the street, said, "One block,
fifteen seconds." Duane said, "There it is," and his voice may have trembled
when he said it. Georgie and Candy turned away from the black man and looked
down the street at the yellow brick building with the plastic sign, and the
short stoop out front. "Remember what I said, Duane. We'll be in there for one
minute," Georgie said softly into his ear, and when Duane tried to turn his
head away, she caught his earlobe and tugged it back, pinched it between her
nails. Duane flinched, and she said, "If you drive away, one of us will hunt
you down and kill you. If you drive, Duane, you're dead. Isn't that right,
Candy?" "That's right," Candy said, looking at him. She let some ice
show, then switched to her
God-Duane-I'd-Love-to-Fuck-You-But-I-Gotta-Be-True-To-Dickie look. "But he
won't drive. Duane's okay." She patted his thigh. "Oh, I'll do it," Duane said. He looked like a trapped rat. "I
mean, I'll do it. I did it in Rice Lake, didn't I?" He pulled the van to the curb and Georgie gave him a look,
then the two women pulled nude nylon stockings over their faces and took the
pistols out of their coat pockets. "Let's go," Georgie said. She climbed out, and Candy followed
a step behind; it passed through Georgie's mind that Candy looked radiant. "I feel like I might pop one," Candy said to Georgie, as they
climbed the four steps to the Credit Union door. Franklin was halfway down the block when they went inside and
he said, "The two women are inside. Pulled the nylons over their heads. It's
going down." Five seconds later, Del and Kupicek stopped at the corner
behind him, then eased forward so they could see the back of the Chevy van and
Cale's head. They were forty yards away. Sloan stopped at the next corner up, and eased forward until
he could see the front of the truck. "You set?" Lucas asked. He cracked the
back door. "Yeah." Sloan nodded, looked almost sleepy and yawned.
Tension. "Let's go," Lucas said. And in the handset he said,
"Go." Georgie and Candy went in hard, very large, very loud,
screaming, masks, guns, Georgie first: "On the wall," she screamed, "on the wall," and Candy behind
her, vaulting to the top of the cash counter, screaming, the gun big in her
hand, the hole at the muzzle looking for eyes. "On the wall..." Four women employees and a single customer, a man in a black
ski jacket and tinted eyeglasses, were inside the credit union. The woman
closest to Candy looked like a carp, her mouth opening and closing, opening and
closing, hands coming up, then waving, as though she could wave away a bullet.
She wore a pink sweater with hand-darned blue flax blossoms in a line across
the chest. Another woman curled up and turned away, looking back at them over
her shoulder, and stepped against the back wall, next to a filing cabinet. She
wouldn't look at Candy. A younger woman, a cashier, jumped back, yelped once,
put her hands over her mouth, backed away, knocked a phone off a table, jumped
again, froze. The fourth woman simply backed away, her hands at her
shoulders. Georgie said, rapid-fire, a vocal machine gun: "Easy, easy,
everybody take it easy. Everybody shut up, shut up, shut up, and stand still.
Stand still, everybody shut up... This is a holdup, shut up." They'd been inside for ten seconds. Candy dropped behind the
counter and pulled a pillowcase out of her waistband and started dumping cash
drawers. "Not enough," she shouted over Georgie's chant. "Not enough,
there's more somewhere." Georgie picked out the woman with the best clothes, the woman
with the flax blossoms, pointer her finger at her and shouted, "Where is it,
where's the rest of it?" The woman said, "No-no-no..." Georgie pointed her pistol at the man in the ski jacket and
said, "If you don't say, in one second I'm gonna blow his fuckin' head off, his
fuckin' head." Georgie was posed in a two-handed TV-cop's position, the
pistol pointing at the man's head, never wavering. The flax-blossom woman
looked around for somebody to help her, somebody to direct her, but there
wasn't anybody. She sagged and said, "There's a box in the office." Candy grabbed her, roughed her, shoved her toward the tiny
cubicle in the back. The woman, scuttling ahead, pointed at a box on the floor
in the footwell of the desk. Candy shoved her back toward the door, picked up
the box, put it on the desk, and popped the top: stacks of currency, tens,
twenties, fifties, hundreds. "Got it," she shouted. She dumped it in the pillowcase. "Let's go," Georgie shouted. "Let's go..." Candy twisted the top of the pillowcase and threw it over her
shoulder, like Santa Claus, and hustled around the cash counter toward the
door. The man in the ski jacket had backed against the wall at a check-writing
desk, his hands over his head, a twisted, trying-to-please smile on his face,
his eyes frightened white spots behind the amber-tinted specs. "What are you laughing at?" Candy screamed at him. "Are you
laughing at us?" The smile got broader, but he waved his fingers and said, "No,
no, I'm not laughing..." "Fuck you," she said, and she shot him in the face. The blast in the small office was a bomb: the four women
shrieked and went down. The man simply dropped, a spray of blood on the tan
wall behind his head, and Georgie spun and said, "Go." They were out the door in seconds... "Do it," Del said, and Kupicek floored it. Sloan was coming in from the front. Duane saw him coming, had
no time to wonder. The car swerved and screeched to a stop three inches from the
van's front bumper, wedging him to the curb. From behind, in a flash in his
rearview mirror, he saw another car wedge in behind him. In the next
half-second, the passenger door flew open and the big black pizza guy was
there, and a gun pointed at the bridge of Duane's nose. "Don't even fuckin' scratch," Franklin said, in his pleasant
voice, which wasn't very pleasant. "Just sit tight." He reached across, flipped
the shift lever into park, killed the engine, pulled the keys from the ignition
and let them fall on the floor. "Just sit." And then there were more guys, all on the passenger side of
the car. But Duane, as interested as he was in the muzzle of Franklin's gun,
turned to look at the door of the credit union. He'd heard the shot: the sound was muffled, but there wasn't
any doubt. "Shit," said the black man. He said, loudly, "Watch it, watch
it, we got a shot." "Go," screamed Georgie. She was smiling, like a South American
revolutionary poster-girl, her dark hair whipping back, and she covered the
inner door while Candy exploded through the outer door onto the stoop and then
Georgie was through behind her and the van was right there. And the cops. They heard the shouting, though Candy never could isolate a
word. She was aware of Georgie's gun coming up behind her and she felt her hand
loosen on the bag and the bag falling off to the left, and her own gun coming
up. She started squeezing the trigger before the gun was all the way up and she
saw the thin slat-faced man, and his nose might have been about the size of a
Campbell's soup-can lid and her pistol came up, came up... Lucas heard the shot inside and he went sideways and saw
Franklin reflexively crouch. Off to the left, Sherrill was propped over the top
of Kupicek's car, her pistol leveled at the door and Lucas thought, Hope
they don't look out the window... Then the door flew open and the two LaChaise women were on the
stoop and their guns were coming up and he shouted, "No, don't, no, don't," and
he heard Del yelling, and Candy LaChaise started firing and he saw Sherrill's
gun bucking in her hand... Candy saw the man with the yellow teeth and the black hole at
the end of his pistol and the woman with the dark hair and maybe if she
had time she thought, Too late... She felt the bullets go through, several of them, was aware of
the noise, of the flash, of the faces like wanted posters, all straining toward
her, but no pain, just a jostling feel, like rays of light pushing through her
chest... then her vision went, and she felt Georgie falling beside her. She was
upside down, her feet on the stoop, her head on the sidewalk, and she waited
for the light. The light would come, and behind it... She was gone. Lucas was shouting, "Hold it, hold it," and five seconds after
the two women burst from the credit union, there was no reason to fire his own
weapon. In the sudden silence, through the stink of the smokeless
powder, somebody said, "Jesus H. Christ." |
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